I have never really ever peer reviewed someone eles's work but i really enjoyed it. I usally never want someone eles to read what i write because i don't think i write that well but it actually wasn't that bad. The reason i chose a surfer as my picture is because the essay i reviewed was a about how someone had to overcome there fear of sharks and get in the ocean to surf. This was appealing to me because i grew up in cocoa beach and thats what we did for fun and i always remembered that first time i went out i was so scared but i finally made it and loved it ever since. I wish gainesville had a beach!!!
I agree the peer review was not as bad as I thought it would be.
ReplyDeleteI wish Gainesville had a beach too! Then I would really love my town!
-Jenny Ramsey
I had to take a prep Enc class and we had to write paragraphs for the class in order to pass and I really enjoyed it too. I remember thinking it would be fun to read all of my class-mates paragraphs, give my opinion, and correct their grammar. And the peer review reminded me of that class and so in a way my wish of wanting to give advice came true!
ReplyDeleteOh and beach or a theme park would be cool to have in G-ville, I think!
-Sarah Ramsey
I have never been surfing so I wouldnt know how much fun people say it is BUT I do know that I most likely wouldnt be able to overcome a fear of sharks and etc in the water :) but like it has already been stated....I WISH GVILLE HAD A BEACH TOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean it would be perfect. Whenever me and my friends, or just me, are bored we could escape to the beach and make the day A WHOLE LOT BETTER and like Jenny said...make the town better as well!
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